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If booking through Expedia, I’ve noticed that the assigned rooms tend to be located toward the back of the building. The rooms were still comfortable, but I would have preferred a location closer to the ocean side.
I also found the front desk staff less accommodating than expected. During a previous stay, I requested an early check-in, but the request was declined despite the property appearing to have only about 30% occupancy at the time.
One additional area for improvement is the dining experience. It was difficult to find healthy menu options, and a broader selection of lighter, healthier choices would be appreciated."